Monday, April 18, 2011

Magpie 62


Old Fashioned Breakfast


Hey you!
Why you be winkin' at me
Half your eye be missin'
Half your hair gone too
Smile ~ you're on Candid Camera!



24 comments:

  1. I love an old fashioned breakfast!

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  2. Are we to take it Mum has expired? ooer...

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  3. Mmmm... this litle drama seems too real to be fiction! I hope MOTHER recovers in the sequel!

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  4. "...and they all lived happily ever after?"

    (That's 'old-fashioned' also, I guess--grin!)
    PEACE!

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  5. We all want to know...how is mom doing? A clever morality tale. Vb

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  6. No way! Mom is just recuping right? Love the style of those old-fashioned breakfasts.

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  7. Oh...now you've aroused my interest!

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  8. I thought Mom was having a meltdown in the kitchen with Chip over Georgia's behavior that morning. It's not just the skipping breakfast, it's her sullen teen-ager demeanor... And now Georgia's going to get the frustrated story about Chip! This play has summed up this family in a nutshell! Good play, dialogue, and point!

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  9. You have left us in suspense. Nice dialogue!

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  10. breakfast does say so much - nice morality play, but then, I think teenagers are ... teenagers but they grow out of it, eventually

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  11. Nice one.
    What happened Mom, lets hope she saw sense and went out for breakfast, great family dynamic.

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  12. Which one are you, Mum, Chip or daughter?

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  13. How quickly the roles can change. Well done.

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  14. Lovely piece of writing. They eventually become us, fried breakfasts and all. lol

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  15. Like mother, like daughter! When things are finished, they seem to start all over again...you did so much with this..

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  16. Nice work, but gotta repeat the question, where's Mum?

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  17. Oooooo .... the neat thing about writing something like this? The answer lies in the mind of the reader's imagination.

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  18. Old- fashioned breakfast.. I miss those for sure!
    I haven't really eaten many mornings- actually years.. my circumstances..

    Since last 2 months, I have resumed or may I say begun to eat in the mornings again- it definitely feels great!!

    Hugs xox

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  19. Thank you for visiting me and your kind words.. :D
    Much appreciated :) x

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  20. Exemplary writing, perfect in its execution.

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  21. This seems like it may be sad. Hope that the Mom is okay. Lovely play! :o)

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