ugh...to feel lik e a sideshow is not much fun...always having to be putting on the show...
I like the use of the carnivale and ferris wheel flashing and burning ~
"...beauty burning bright."That's a great ending to a magic illusion like this. Well done.
Oh, what a marvelous ending line. Perfectly chosen words - precipice, and the image of a carnival... And I have never liked ferris wheels.
This is so lovely and sad! I adore the last lines.
I like the mystery in this. The carnival images are excellent--all that illusion of beauty. Thanks for posting on Poetry Jam.
I always want to be the side show instead of the main attraction - but maybe not in THIS carnival :)
Mmmm! I really like this one!