Thursday, April 12, 2012

Poetry Jam ~ Mystery




running, dancing, bending, kicking  
skeletons, posers all 
bones, alive with nerves, blood vessels
muscles attached, sinewy strings 
like pulling puppets through space



9 comments:

  1. You've truly given an excellent visual of what our inner muscles do with this poem. It's unique and different, and the photo you have chosen is interesting as well.

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  2. the skeleton is def fascinating...and without it we could be like this jello mold contained only by our skins so i am thankful for it too...smiles.

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  3. there is a pull to the clean form of a skeleton.
    enjoyed the light-heart dance
    of this poem's tone.

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  4. Wow, your poem goes so very well with the visual! A fascinating take on the prompt.

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  5. wonderful- we are puppets in space! and I love your new profile pic- looks like you're telling us something!

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  6. It is an amazing thing the body....more proof there is a God....love your response to the prompt Helen! :-)

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  7. ha ha it is really wonderfull

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  8. We must drink our milk... :) I just learned I need to take a few calcium pills as I am hovering on the border line as to what is healthy for my bones... Will start lifting weights with a personal trainer as well... sigh... but perhaps that itsy bitsy yellow bikini won't be such a 'fantasy" by the time I get done. :)

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