1985
Just A Dream
I sleep on your side of the bed
my head resting on your pillow
I feel closer to you that way
I sleep
I dream
I toss
I turn
searching for you
searching for you
in a room
devoid of warmth
am I in REM sleep
or deep into R.E.M.
the man on the moon is calling
am I dreaming
the man on the moon is calling
am I dreaming
are you here
I feel you touching me
I feel you touching me
I hear you whisper
I hear music .. sacred chanting
I hear music .. sacred chanting
I hear you laughing
I am falling ~ falling
I am falling ~ falling
deeper ~ deeper
into you .. onto you .. beyond you
I awaken ~~ you are gone
into you .. onto you .. beyond you
I awaken ~~ you are gone

Oh this captures the feelings so well. One can feel the sense of loss on waking. Well done.
ReplyDeleteOh, so real!
ReplyDeletesad that they are gone when you wake...the sleeping on the pillow to feel closer...is all too real...
ReplyDeleteVery vivid write, Helen. I could feel the pain of loss.
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The feeling so vivid and then loss...powerful piece
ReplyDeletei agree with everyone above! a wonderful write!!!
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Nice. Sad... but nice.
ReplyDeleteThis captures the strange sensation of dreaming really well. A really vivid dream stays with you. Also liked this poem as i am an R.E.M fan!
ReplyDeletewow wow wow...so beautifully sculptured...loved this poem :-)
ReplyDeleteI do that on nights when I'm missing my DH. Such a powerful poem, really feels for the reader.
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