Saturday, June 16, 2012

Just A Dream

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Just A Dream


I sleep on your side of the bed

my head resting on your pillow


I feel closer to you that way


I sleep


 I dream

I toss

 I turn

searching for you


in a room

devoid of warmth

am I in REM sleep

or deep into R.E.M.

the man on the moon is calling


am I dreaming


are you here

I feel you touching me


 I hear you whisper

I hear music .. sacred chanting


 I hear you laughing

I am falling ~ falling


deeper ~ deeper

into you .. onto you .. beyond you 


I awaken ~~ you are gone
 










10 comments:

  1. Oh this captures the feelings so well. One can feel the sense of loss on waking. Well done.

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  2. sad that they are gone when you wake...the sleeping on the pillow to feel closer...is all too real...

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  3. Very vivid write, Helen. I could feel the pain of loss.
    K

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  4. The feeling so vivid and then loss...powerful piece

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  5. i agree with everyone above! a wonderful write!!!

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  6. This captures the strange sensation of dreaming really well. A really vivid dream stays with you. Also liked this poem as i am an R.E.M fan!

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  7. wow wow wow...so beautifully sculptured...loved this poem :-)

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  8. I do that on nights when I'm missing my DH. Such a powerful poem, really feels for the reader.

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