Saturday, February 2, 2013

Marian's Mini-Challenge

Music In Every Breath I Take

heart beats 

magical notes
my life is a symphony 
con spirito ~ the beat goes on






18 comments:

  1. Those heart beats can be a show stopper ~ Love the title too ~

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  2. I just knew you'd write something about music, Helen! Love your cinquain.

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  3. How accomplished is that: it is about music and sounds like it. Chapeau!

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  4. awwww, how great. it DOES sound like, well, what it should sound like! beautiful.
    i'm glad you like that photo, just a snapshot, but somehow it appeals anyway, right?
    now write more cinquains! ;)

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  5. A brief capture of a looong adventure. Cheerfully and beautifully done.

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  6. That is a pretty dramatic ending.

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  7. The music of the heart...I like seeing life as a symphony. Nicely done.

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  8. Beautiful imagery. That is quite the twist.

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  9. Ah, con spirito, dancing to the rhythm of life. Well done.

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  10. Well, that is interesting! And well done.

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  11. la de da de dee....la de da de da...

    Hey, did anyone see Cher come through here just now?

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    1. ... sounds more like Sinatra singing Strangers in the Night to me.

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  12. the beat goes on then stops.... LOVE that!

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  13. Wow, you play the flute, how nice. Lovely poem with a twist ... the ending can mean different things, great metaphor, too. Well done all around, Helen! :)

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  14. Beautiful! I love this poem and the music of our hearts!
    How clever :D
    And the twist...

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  15. Such beauty in the music our heart plays. I love the flute..you are so talented.

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  16. wonderful cinquain! i'm so envious of you playing the flute! i can't play anything, can't carry a tune, can't sing in key. but i do love music.

    have a lovely week!

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  17. I'll have to try this type of poetry construction- I sure like yours and what? you also play the flute? You are so talented! I just tried something new: http://katheworsley.blogspot.com/2013/02/the-cookie-jar-is-full.html
    It was fun to write!

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