What a unique response this is, Helen. I love the opposition between the life blood (warmth) and the ice.
Ice cold blood with warmth of emotions
you take us to the surreal world ~ Liking the craving collapse & blue plasma becoming one with the ice ~ Happy Friday ~
What a unique take.........love the blue tinged plasma and the whole idea of a Netherworld.
hmmm, i like the unexpected turn with "voyeur" in the middle of this, it made me stop and study and think a bit.
Awesome take on the prompt...PeaceSiggi
eerie, the plunge from detached... indifferent... unaware
"blue tinged plasma becomes one with the ice" Love that. What a wonderful response to the prompt!
loved the ice cold blood...it went along with how I thought when I read the prompt...
Blood and ice -- heat and cold blue plasma. Wonderful!
Dearest Helen,You always can put so much power into a few words...Hugs,Mariette
its the indifferent and detached that get me...that just watch as the blood spills
this takes to a different realm.....little eerie....yet wonderful!
what a unique take on the prompt
Wondrous Helen!YOU gave life back to this glorious blue~
Oh wow...your perspective feels so raw and organic, Helen...I just love where you went with this...thank you for writing, I enjoyed this!! :)
This is a haunting piece, Helen. Your view of the cold, blue water as plasma, with the bystander disinterested in the demise happening in front of her/him... or is it the depression of the one who lies there dying? So much depth to this one! Amy
You could see farther into this blue depth than I could, Helen. Bravissima...you brought us so much in response to the prompt.K
How merciful then that when our journey must end gentle comfort glacial slow that we may not know we feel asleep...