Friday, May 23, 2014

Dissonant Harmony





off key harmony
mothers daughters colliding
dissonant voices
half-step from perfect
lyrics better left unsung


10 comments:

  1. You have given me my mantra, Helen, for which I humbly thank you......this is PERFECT!!!!!! "lyrics better left unsung". How I wish!

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  2. Oh, I know this music well...I have two daughters. :)

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  3. Thank goodness for perseverance of the oldies and the classic rock of the 60's and 70's, even the REAL songs of the 50's.

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  4. Better left unsung, you know it!

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  5. Life is too short to sing out of tune with your children but sometimes that is just the way it is.

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  6. this really is perfect, Helen. perfect!

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  7. there are some better left unsung,
    but many that go unsung that should have

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  8. I can relate to this, Helen. My brothers inherited Dad's musical ability, while my sister and I could chase everyone out of the house by singing "On Top of Old Smokey" while we did the dishes.
    K

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  9. sounds like a private moment perfectly captured!

    love your writing, hope to keep visiting!

    stacy lynn mar
    http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/

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