Sunday, August 2, 2015

Slumber Sweet




you came close enough
to feel my shame 
i have no need 
to show you more 






18 comments:

  1. Wow, wow and wow! Once in a while a poem takes my breath away...this one did.

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  2. oh my Helen- this is stupendous!

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  3. A story told in few words. Nice work.

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  4. Perfect for the picture, Helen. xx

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  5. Whew beautiful one, Helen!

    xoxox,
    CC

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  6. ..............in her own dreamworld..............

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  7. Such a pretty picture. I like your interpretation very much.

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  8. Fantastic interpretation of the image. A zinger!

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  9. Dearest Helen,
    You are a true master with words. Each word telling a powerful story...
    Hugs,
    Mariette

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  10. Very much on her own, simple but powerful words

    Hank

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  11. Oh! Well this one took my breath for a moment, wow. And that really is a sweet photo.

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  12. Interesting to read them as two separate poems also. You more than did the picture justice.

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