Saturday, October 22, 2016

Fun With Words




I am here
so where are you 
Said you'd come
By half past two!

What the hell
Now here I wait 
You stood me up
On our first date!

Do I care
No not a whit 
You’re not worth it
Not one bit!

I'm movin’ on
Crossed off my list 
It's quite a long one
Get my gist?

Missed the boat 
I gotta say 
Next in line
Come make my day!

14 comments:

  1. Ha.. reminds me of a sign a girl had in an office once..
    Piss me off, pay the price.

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  2. Love it, Helen! Wish I knew this when I was twenty.

    Great photo!!

    Jane x

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  3. Very catchy - almost a song, isn't it.

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  4. This is great fun and, yes, very catchy! can't say I ever had a list, though :(

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  5. Delightful poem and photo. Great post for Nov 1 & 2, too.

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  6. Much better than sitting by the fun, fun read.

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  7. Smart girl, she is certainly not the loser in this game
    Thanks for playing, and i know you had fun writing it. Double well done

    much love...

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  8. Oh my, I'm laughing! Love where this prompt took you.

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  9. Sounding bad here, Helen. Bad is good going here for you. Did they have lists back then? We knew of the proverbial 'Little Black Book" though I never had either.
    ..

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  10. You made my day with this witty, pointed poem

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  11. oooh fiesty!!❤️ lovely take on the prompt!!

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  12. That's the way to let him know he missed a second chance. Love this!

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  13. A smile wit well witten words

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