Wassily Kandinsky ~~ Wikimedia Commons
gallery
tour
boomerangs
floating
way
out in space
i
see them quite clearly
don't
you
kaleidoscope
colors
that curve when they fly
abstract
perfection
from
my point of view
geometric
improv
shot
straight from the hip
hitting
me squarely
[ inner
psyche trip ]
a day
at the gallery
time
to float free
the
artist, his paintings
and
neophyte me
Your opinion is hardly neophyte and is a good as anybody else's
ReplyDeleteAs a fellow Neophyte I believe your perspective is wonderful! Everyone had their own way of reading and interpreting when it comes to art and poetry ❤️
ReplyDeleteI really like the slick rhythm and rhyme of these lines, Helen:
ReplyDelete‘geometric improv
shot straight from the hip
hitting me squarely
an inner psyche trip’.
Hi Helen! Oh, you so impress me with your words and how you can paint a picture with them in just a few lines. Thanks for popping in to see me and I hope all is well with you.
ReplyDeleteMakes me want to go to MOMA! Love Kandinsky and this poem!
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Well, I love your perspective. :)
ReplyDeleteArt is all about perception. Clever use of rhyme throughout your poem. It was fun to read.
ReplyDeleteA perfect example of how perspective influences what we take away from art. I’m with Toni- not neophyte at all. Remember, the art-world thrives on interpretations. Good one, Helen!
ReplyDeleteDearest Helen,
ReplyDeleteYes, I too see those boomerangs way out in space!
Too much shooting from the hip as well; may we soon float freely and enjoy the many colors of the kaleidoscope.
Hugs,
Mariette
I would love to spend a day with you at an art gallery! what a hoot it would be. So sorry to be responding do late to your unique perspective.
ReplyDeleteThe rhymes work with the bold and playful piece. I like how you captured its spirit.
ReplyDeleteIt's so cool to embrace your own unique perspective — the world is better because of the many individual ways of looking at things. I feel like floating with those boomerangs and kaleidoscopic colours.
ReplyDeleteP.s. I apologize for such a long delay in reading and responding to your take on the prompt. :-)
-HA
Nice.
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