this poem is composed on a blank slate ..
storyboard of my life
erasure no option.
this poem is an unfinished symphony ..
a mind-numbing score
a voice silenced.
this poem will never be read ..
invisible ink the medium
it will never be loved.
a never-ending tragedy
born on an empty stage.

Nicely penned piece Helen - each statement undone by what follows - though let's hope that, like all good things, this poem does finally find an end. Thank you for sharing and joining in. See you in the new year.
ReplyDeleteYour voice needs to be heard! Poems read!! Yup, like all good things. See you next year! Happy holidays.
ReplyDeleteI like the rhythm of the long and short lines. Like two poems intersecting.
ReplyDeleteMethinks your poem will sing on, like a never-ending etude of joy, leaving droplets of happy in the lives you touch. IMHO!
ReplyDeleteThis does feel like two poems intersecting and highlighting the contrasts in our lives. I like the idea of being born on an empty stage in your last line which somehow draws us back to the first line of the poem being composed on the blank slate. Cool concepts, enjoying your poems this year! 💖
ReplyDeleteInteresting poem, Helen.
ReplyDeleteExcellent response to Peter’s wonderful prompt. Hope you have a great holiday season, and look forward to reading more of your work in 2021.
ReplyDeleteI feel that I am also reading two poems here Helen. This line stood out for me:
ReplyDeletemy poem is an unfinished symphony
Thanks for joining in and wishing you Happy Holidays! Cheers!
I like the cyclical nature, starting with the blank slate and culminating on the empty stage, and I get the feel it cycles back again, the waxing and waning is like the waves, each one brief and pushing into the next one, this is tender and painful and beautiful, but the possibilities becon us. Very nice, and subtle but spot on response to the prompt. :)
ReplyDeletethe above by unknown is me, Lona :)
ReplyDeleteI hope that the voices of poet will continue to resonate over time... both singing and singe.
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