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tango is a feeling that must be danced
head to head, chest to chest, eyes closed
every powerful move, bodies in control
take me in your arms, I am yours
head to head, chest to chest, eyes closed
I know you well, I trust you
take me in your arms, I am yours
eroticism and passion overflow
I know you well, I trust you
every powerful move, bodies in control
eroticism and passion overflow
tango is a feeling that must be danced
Today in dVerse Poets Pub Merril presents us with the challenge of writing a Pantoum!
Your pantoum evokes the tango rhythm, Helen, and its passion flows through your words.
ReplyDeleteDearest Helen,
ReplyDeleteMy BEST tango dancers are long time in heaven. One got killed by a postal delivery car when I was 16 and his brother is gone for several decades...
One day we will dance again!
Hugs,
Mariette
You said you had trouble with this form, but it flows with the power of dance. The passion flows, too, in the evocation of the tango. Well-done, Helen!
ReplyDeleteLove what you captured in the dance... the music in tango goes so well with the repetitions of the form
ReplyDeleteHelen, I like how you started at tango is a feeling that must be danced, which flips tango is a dance that must be felt. Tricky!
ReplyDeleteSuch a passionate dance Helen. I love the tango movements.
ReplyDeleteYou used the topic creatively. A beautiful poem poetically describes The Tango! Have a nice day❤️!
ReplyDeleteAnd it sounds like a sensuous tango!
ReplyDeleteWow, Helen! What a dance of words! You captured the essence of Tango perfectly.
ReplyDeleteOoh la la!
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