Art class heads for the forest's edge. A bonfire, marshmallows, hot buttered rum waiting. Dusk is settling, Ben and Lydia stare at their professor's assignment with completely different visions. "I’m going for realism," Ben declares, squinting into the trees. "I’ll capture every branch, leaf, and” .. “Oh, please!” Lydia rolls her eyes, dipping her brush in hot rum instead of the paint water. “Realism is dead. Abstract is the soul of this forest.” Ben snorts. “What soul? I see sticks and dirt!” Waving her paintbrush wildly, Lydia points out “There! You can see a very small patch of dark blue, framed by a little branch, pinned up by a naughty star!” “Lydia, you’re delusional!” With a grin on her face, she steals his toasted marshmallow. “Perhaps, but I’m inspired!” Ben just mutters something about “needing more rum” to survive art class in the forest.

I love the setting and atmosphere of a bonfire by the edge of a forest, Helen, and the little touches of humour, Helen. I also like the realistic dialogue.
ReplyDeleteHa... I think with a bit more Rum, Ben will go abstract as well.
ReplyDeleteDearest Helen,
ReplyDeleteLOVE Lydia's view and she is so right!
Hugs,
Mariette
"Men are from Mars, and Women are from Venus."
ReplyDeleteA clever little satirical play on art "controversies," Helen, and you capture the character and tone so well! Love your seamless use of the quote too. 🙂
ReplyDeleteYou had me smiling at this creative gem of prosery. A little rum and sky watching and I am sure the abstract will shine.
ReplyDeleteThis is delicious! And Lydia is awesome. Poor Ben, lol!
ReplyDeleteI love the interplay of of this gentle pairing of difference, and the playful ending.
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