Friday, March 21, 2025

In Response

 Rosemary invites us to compose a response to a poem  someone else wrote ~ I chose Leonard Cohen's "Dance Me To The End Of Love" ~ my favorite lines:

Dance me to your beauty with a burning violin
Dance me through the panic 'til I'm gathered safely in

 Dancing with my Grandson Charlie
  My hand rests in his

we twirl together

his smile a melody

I have known forever


I follow, as always I will

someday my feet will falter

someday I will let go

but not tonight


tonight we dance

to the melody of a wish

I hold deep in my bones

that life is kind to him


that love finds him whole

that his road is long, never lonely

as music swells, his eyes shine

I gather myself into the moment


knowing he will carry this dance

long after I am gone


















10 comments:

  1. "Lift me like an olive branch and be my homeward dove, and dance me etc"
    Lovely song. Lovely s your poem.

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  2. Do you know this version? With Sharon Robinson who is Gold Medal gorgeous.
    https://youtu.be/Ki9xcDs9jRk?si=ejnpXiOLDRUtgKUu

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  3. Lovely! Blessings on you both!

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  4. An absolutely beautiful poem and pic. Thank you for sharing this lovely experience with us.

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  5. What a treasure … these heartfelt tender wishes in a melancholy moment that you framed so beautifully with a dance.

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  6. A beautiful and touching poem that your grandson will forever treasure!

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  7. I love how this builds to such a romantic conclusion - Jae

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  8. Wonderful poem, Helen. You do Leonard proud.

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I appreciate each of you and the comments you leave ~~ thanks so much.