Tuesday, April 8, 2025

Overheard in the Bistro

 Tuesday in the Pub means time for Poetics ~ Dora is hosting today ~ the focus ~ Dialogue in poetry. Dial it in ~ make it count! Could not resist the allure of Collins and Cohen.



Setting the scene: Billy Collins and Leonard Cohen

A table in the corner of their favorite Manhattan bistro

Billy ~ elbows propped on the table, chin in hands

ready to devour his pastrami on rye

across from him ~ folding his napkin like a hallelujah origami

Cohen ~ "come now, you can't eat a poem." 

Billy, with a wide grin "Forget about it ~ this moment? ~ IS the poem!"

[ the cashier knowing who they were ~ blinked twice

possibly composing her own haiku ]  


Cohen ~ "sure but mine will last a lifetime." 

Billy gesturing wildly with a pickle "yours are the kind of lyrics that sit quietly in a room  ~ asking for permission to blink."

Cohen, reigning in his irritation ~ "and yours are like furniture you throw out a window, calling it jazz!"

"I AM jazz!" Billy responded ~ tapping a rhythm on the table ~ "I once wrote three sonnets while riding the C train in rush hour ~ nursing a hangover."

Cohen, leaning in with deadly calm ~ "I once wrote a villanelle so moving it made a tulip CRY."

"So what" from Collins ~ "Tulips are suckers for repetition!"

[ finally ~ the cashier asked ~ "do either of you want a bag? " ]

Billy nodded ~ "for all this literary baggage? ~ YES!"

Leonard winked, laughed ~ and tipped her $50 ~ ~ plus a few line breaks!





19 comments:

  1. Very clever take. Did they ever meet irl?
    -Eric

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  2. OMG, Sister! This is SOOOOOOO GOOOOOOD! You write like you were actually sharing their table.

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  3. I so enjoyed this, Helen. You catch their singular, poetic vibes and take us right into that bistro to characterize them through their banter. Love it!

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  4. Thank you Ellen,
    I really felt like I was there with them!

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  5. Fantastic!!!
    The moment is the poem, i luv that

    Much♡love

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  6. A brilliant imagining, Helen. I felt like I was eavesdropping on the conversation. I especially love the way you captured them in their stance:
    ‘Billy ~ elbows propped on the table, chin in hands
    ready to devour his pastrami on rye
    across from him ~ folding his napkin like a hallelujah origami’
    and the cashier ‘possibly composing her own haiku’!
    The conversation is inspired – I smiled at “Tulips are suckers for repetition!"

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  7. Really sharp imaginative ear for the kind of banter one would expect from the two, with great dollops of the literary for Billy's pastrami. And was it tea and oranges for Leonard?

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    1. OH, Leonard loved his red wine. Consumed lots during concert performances. LOL.

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  8. Love it, somehow we all take these poets so deadly serious because we rely only on what they wrote.

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  9. That tulip line.....gorgeous...and the one after it, plus all the others, too...this verse dances in dialogue...

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  10. Oh, this is classic, Helen! I love what you have done here. So perfectly written and the waitress gets in on the converstion as well! I love Billy Collins. Cohen isn't bad either! :>)

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  11. HI Helen, this is brilliant. A great and entertaining dialogue poem.

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  12. Two of my favorite wordsmiths. Bravo!!

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  13. I so enjoyed reading this one, Helen! 😍 Gorgeous work done ❤️❤️

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I appreciate each of you and the comments you leave ~~ thanks so much.