Tuesday, July 22, 2025

Candyland ~


Lillian has us dreaming of candy in the dVerse Pub ~ I preface this video by declaring I'm too old to be embarrassed by anything ~ anymore!!!





payday today / out for some fun

my guys Mike and Ike / well, I sure ain't no nun

dancin' boots on / lookin' good and plenty hot

those 'big hunk bars' / we're givin' 'em a shot

sugar daddies / sugar babies / red hots too

good and plenty sweet tarts / givin' you a clue

when the night has ended / star burst fills the sky

bouncer Mr. Goodbar says / time to say bye-bye









Posted by Helen at 6:16 PM
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17 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 22, 2025 at 10:51 PM

    sounds like a good night

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  2. Anita SabatJuly 22, 2025 at 11:07 PM

    Star burst & super memories for sure!
    A lot is happening :)

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  3. Kim M. RussellJuly 23, 2025 at 1:11 AM

    This poem has great rhythm, Helen, and the rhyme, internal and end rhyme, add to it. I also like the repetition in ‘sugar daddies / sugar babies’, which emphasises the sugar overload!

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  4. Merril D. SmithJuly 23, 2025 at 3:12 AM

    I know you're a musician, Helen, and I've been waiting for you to do a musical post! I loved it! (And nothing to be embarrassed about!)

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  5. AJJuly 23, 2025 at 9:08 AM

    Love this Helen 😊

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  6. lillianJuly 23, 2025 at 9:12 AM

    OH HELEN!!!!! THIS IS JUST TOO FABULOUS!!!! ANY ONE READING AFTER ME, BE SURE YOU WATCH THE VIDEO!!!
    Truly, you have outdone yourself. This is AMAZING. I called my husband in to watch it. Your smile, your outfit, your calm nonassuming delivery....honestly, I think you HAVE to win some kind of prize for this! You just made my day and all my time creating prompts for dVerse worthwhile. I LOVE this and LOVE YOU for doing it!!! BRAVO!!!

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    1. lillianJuly 23, 2025 at 9:13 AM

      PS: and the poem is fabulous in and of itself!!! Glad you had so much fun with it!

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    2. HelenJuly 23, 2025 at 9:19 AM

      OK I am now officially blushing. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, Lillian.

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  7. Sanaa RizviJuly 23, 2025 at 10:32 AM

    Helen! This is SO cool! 😍 You are a rockstar! ❤️❤️

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  8. AnonymousJuly 23, 2025 at 10:43 AM

    A fun read. Nicely done.

    Arcadia Maria

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  9. Poetry for HealingJuly 23, 2025 at 3:00 PM

    Helen that was so much fun and beautifully rendered! I think you won the prize for the best poem and performance. I loved it! ☺️❤️

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  10. JadeLiJuly 23, 2025 at 6:50 PM

    Helen, you made my night. This works so well together:
    "sugar daddies / sugar babies / red hots too"
    I know you were having fun reciting this in your video.

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  11. Gillena CoxJuly 24, 2025 at 1:48 PM

    Nice One, Helen
    Thanks for dropping by my blog

    Much♡love

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  12. Jo-Anne's RamblingsJuly 24, 2025 at 1:54 PM

    I loved this, thanks for posting it

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  13. Sara McNultyJuly 26, 2025 at 5:31 PM

    What a fun & naughty night!

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  14. pvcann.comJuly 28, 2025 at 8:17 AM

    And you thought I was naughty, lol, I laughed, what a kill joy Mr. Goodbar is - he obviously missed those clues :)

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  15. Melissa LemayOctober 13, 2025 at 8:02 AM

    Clever and funny!

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I appreciate each of you and the comments you leave ~~ thanks so much.

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