Friday, September 12, 2025

Fourteen Words

 For Poets & Storytellers ~ Friday Writings




once I looked 

into your eyes 

I knew the flame of love 

burned bright






10 comments:

  1. Awe, so tender 14.
    p.s. Up and at'm now, this prompt needed a picture. Google/Ai found me a nice one.

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  2. I won't leave this here so very long. Been two years since I posted an advice post. Poor lady, https://jimmiehov8.blogspot.com/2025/09/lady-with-wash-needs-advice.html?m=0

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  3. You captured love beautifully in a few words Just look into the eyes

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  4. Love burning bright is the ultimate. No other word needed.

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  5. What more can be added! A poem with attitude - Jae

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  6. I like that, the flame of love burning bright. :)

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  7. Love makes a fiery ring!

    PK

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  8. ...and when I looked away
    the light still lingered on :)

    Beautifully written!

    Found my way here from Poets and Storytellers United.

    Do drop by mine. :)

    Cheers,
    CRD

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