Tuesday, January 13, 2026

My Man Done Me Wrong Blues

Melissa is hosting  dVerse Poetics in the Pub. She asked us to read the lyrics and listen to the song "Folsom Prison Blues" by Johnny cash ~ and write a poem about whatever it evokes for us. 

The poem I share today was written and the video recorded long ago ~ never published. I felt the poem fit Melissa's 'prison' challenge and perhaps it was actually time to post!!


Migrant Mother, Dorothea Lange



My man he gone and left me, done me wrong
my man he gone and left me, done me wrong 
left me with three young'uns 
to raise up good and strong

My mama taught me good, she did
my mama taught me good
taught me everything she could
before she hit that road called "skid"

My mama taught me good, she did
she taught me real good 
i'm just a-wishin' and a-longin'
for them good ole days

I don't need no man to make me whole 
I don't need no man to make me whole
Cause there ain't no man alive
can steal my soul



12 comments:

  1. Awesome, I enjoyed your wonderful singing and this song...well done you!!!

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  2. Wow, Helen, you're a fine poet AND singer...thanks for sharing your talents!

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  3. I love the perfect formation of your lyrical verse - insightful and mesmerising - Jae

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  4. I love it, Helen! I could see you singing the blues in some jazzy nightspot! Well done!

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  5. I'm glad you decided to debut your song. Really good singing, Helen!

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  6. I enjoyed your ‘My Man Done Me Wrong Blues’ very much, Helen, both poem and song, and you have a delightful voice. Your poem resonated with me, having had a first husband who done me wrong and left me to bring up my daughter alone.

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  7. I love everything about this! Especially the final affirmations.❤️

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  8. Love what you did with that blues.... so cool... and just before I did this I booked ticket for Emylou Harris last tour....

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  9. LOVE your creativity: lyrics and singing. What a talent you are and so happy to have you as a dVerse friend.

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  10. Men! We are useless! Nicely written 👏

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  11. Bravo, Helen! For both the creation and the sentiments. How good you look and sound, too. (And btw, blues is my favourite thing!)

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I appreciate each of you and the comments you leave ~~ thanks so much.