Showing posts with label Vietnam. Show all posts
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Wednesday, January 7, 2026

One Year in Our Lives

 Dora is hosting the first Poetics challenge of the New Year .. Inspired by the poetry of Elizabeth Bishop, 1911 - 1979. Dora asks us to incorporate Bishop's unique style  in original poems of our own.



One year 

split cleanly in two, your absence 

marked on our calendar

like a shoreline retreating

each month, a shift ~ erosion the boys and I

stepped around, pretending

 the earth beneath was steady


At home our three sons grew taller, increments

measured on our kitchen door frame

pencil marks rising like tides

I carried our daughter those first six months

her heartbeat like a persistent 

tapping ~ morse code against the war

you were trying to outlive


You sent letters, one each day, 365 in total  

describing tropical heat and humidity

the endless unraveling of bodies

      how much you loved and missed us         

  I read each letter as if it might detonate

as if danger could travel through ink


[ later, we bound them in a pretty blue book ]