basic tool they say
for cleaning teeth and brushing gums
to keep decay at bay
for cleaning teeth and brushing gums
to keep decay at bay
I suspect if you are just like me
you hang on way too long
to brushes filled with germs & mold
and that's just plain old wrong
We must hear what dentists preach
replace our brushes often
two weeks, three weeks you should know
they begin to soften
Be careful where you store that brush.
no dark enclosures - cases
your toothbrush needs a place to breathe
dry air - open spaces
you hang on way too long
to brushes filled with germs & mold
and that's just plain old wrong
We must hear what dentists preach
replace our brushes often
two weeks, three weeks you should know
they begin to soften
Be careful where you store that brush.
no dark enclosures - cases
your toothbrush needs a place to breathe
dry air - open spaces
Take heed of what I tell you
listen to what I share
if you don't .. I promise you this
countless hours in your dentist's chair

I can see this one framed in my dentist's office!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Willow send this to the Nat Dental Assoc. or at the very least frame it and give copies to your local dentists, signed of course! LOL
ReplyDeleteWhat sheer fun!
Oh Helen how true is this...I had to spend a few $$$ last year in that chair.....Bravo ...bkm
ReplyDeleteIndeed...
ReplyDeleteTime to replace mine, then.
Learning through Laughter! That's what you've achieved!
ReplyDeletewise words cleanly stated..nice magpie!
ReplyDeleteWhere were you when I needed you!!!
ReplyDeleteSeriously,they are right. Could be a hit in schools!
Well done, nice Magpie.
ReplyDeleteThis magpie is one to share with my 5 daughters...Thank you, Helen!
ReplyDeleteHours indeed. I love it and I am sure do dentists all over.
ReplyDeleteWell done!! And great counsel.
ReplyDeletea remarkable note to young people :)
ReplyDeleteMust print this out and tape it to my bathroom mirror! Three weeks, I've had my toothbrush for... actually I won't say!
ReplyDeleteI will print it and give it to my children... to stop their complaints when sent to brush their teeth.
ReplyDeletegreat magpie
loveNlight
Gabi
Is there a dental journal somewhere you could submit this to? Seriously. Well done - fun magpie!
ReplyDeleteThis is simply adorable. Your use of rhyme is awesome. :-)
ReplyDeleteAnything but the dreaded chair!
ReplyDeleteNicely done. Many dentists would like that on their walls where the patients can see.
ReplyDeleteSuch fun
ReplyDeleteand so true
oh yes....good wise words indeed! I am off to buy my brush! Great advice and great Magpie~
ReplyDeleteHa! I got a good laugh out of this one. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThis poem could replace a tooth! If I had this hung in my bathroom; I'd be sure to brush more often and longer! This is BIG marketing...where's Berowne?
ReplyDeleteI need to read this one to my 4 young kids! They all have pretty bad teeth...Fun Magpie!
ReplyDeleteack. anything to avoid that chair! nice magpie!
ReplyDeleteI must say that you've convinced me -- cute warning!
ReplyDeleteI loved this and I promise to pay attention to it.
ReplyDeleteBut I love my floppy old brush!! Just like my floppy old slippers..but alas, the consequences are different!
ReplyDeleteVery clever!!
Excellent and one that you should offer to your dentist for his waiting room wall!!
ReplyDeleteChristine
Wonderful poem! And I agree, I know your dentist would love a framed copy for his wall!
ReplyDeletethat should be on the mirror in every home!
ReplyDeletesubmit this, somewhere!
awesomely magged!
superlative poetry!!!
ReplyDeleterel
Lesson well taken. How quickly the months fly by.
ReplyDeleteLovely, darling H!
ReplyDeleteHope you are having a fabulous summer so far!
xoxox,
CC
Hi Helen, great job. I did like this. Blogging sure keeps the old mind moving and thinking. Thanks for your visit. Your writing skills are super.
ReplyDeleteQMM
Speaking of... I'm overdue for the dentists. Er oh...
ReplyDeleteNo dark spaces, huh? I need to take better care of my toothbrush, which also means throwing it out more often! This is a really fun read, great magpie!
ReplyDeletewise words indeed!
ReplyDeleteI brush. And I floss. Brief visits to the chair. Happier for it.
ReplyDeleteAll right, I'll be good! Though my brush is not used very often; mostly I dunk my lovely teeth in a bowl of denture cleaner
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun poem Oops time to replace my brush
ReplyDeleteExcellent advice, Helen!
ReplyDeleteHow fun! Reminded me of family reunions of long ago when we kids would be rounded up; the top sweet-eater and most violently afraid tied to a makeshift dental chair; the dentist aunt bracing herself too. The memory of how we looked always make me chuckle, hahah!
ReplyDeleteOh, thanks for resurrecting this one, Helen. Perky for a Sunday morning; just what I needed.
ReplyDeleteAnd now, marching myself away from the breakfast table and straight to the toothbrush. :)
ReplyDeleteI drop it in bleach water. Here's mine from the early '90s:
ReplyDeleteAt the Dentist
It’s too late to pretend
that the overhead lamp
is the sun in Tahiti
and I’m floating on a raft
with a tube down my throat
It’s not really a straw for pina colada
and the grinding drill
I hear coming closer
is not the blender that mixed it
LOVE .....
DeleteI agree any dentist would love this. Wish I'd read this when I was younger
ReplyDeleteI had a dentist who had a sign in his office, which said, "Toothbrushes shouldn't grow comfortable with use. They aren't shoes!" I guess he was right. Also, the sign always brought up images of people brushing their teeth with shoes...
ReplyDeleteI like this!
ReplyDeleteThis was fun Helen. Made me ho brush... :) I loved seeing Tess’s comment, actually, seeing her name. Loved being with the Magpie group? I think of her now and then.
ReplyDeletemasterful use of rhymes, and what a fun poem.
ReplyDeletedentists should frame this poem and hang it in their waiting rooms. makes the trip for anyone more bearable.
I like this Helen and I will endevour to follow the advice!
ReplyDeleteI loved seeing Tess's comment too- Magpie Tales was where my excursion into poetry began.
Anna :o]
Good advice fun poem!
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