Monday, January 25, 2021

No Boxes


1st Grade 1946


don’t put me in a box

cause I sure won’t fit

love my whiskey smooth

And my pinot gris chilled 

 men oh so sweet 

jazz smokin' hot 

friends groovy

religion private

politics honest

So ... no way, no way

would one box do!



28 comments:

  1. I think we have way too many boxes for people... (but I have seen that cats like their boxes tight)

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  2. I don't think anyone could put you in a box! I love how you have expressed your preferences in this out of the box poem :-)

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  3. LOVE the image and LOVE the poem! A self-portrait that is delightful...way to go!

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  4. So many different ways, so many different boxes. No one just goes in one. :D

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  5. I agree with Bjorn and Ingrid, Helen. Too many boxes and nobody wants to be put in one – which is paradoxical as that’s what people tend to do with everyone else. I love the contrast of red hot jazz and cool friends.

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  6. Well I think I'm as eclectic as you. Boxes don't work for that and no one can keep us in them. Cheers to that! (with a sip of smooth Canadian whiskey).

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  7. Well, now we know how you like things and -- if this piece is any example -- we know that you like your poetry well-written. Cool work, Helen.

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  8. I learned a lot about you from your unboxed verse, Helen. A satisfying way to be.

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  9. I suspect there's no box made that would contain the many phases of your delightful self!

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  10. Enjoyable read and such truth in 44 words. How can anyone fit in one box? Nicely done.

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  11. Wow what a read. Nice one. Too many hats for just one box
    Thanks for dropping by to read mine

    Much💖love

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  12. When I saw that cute picture of you it made me smile ear to ear. No box for you for sure!

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  13. That's one cute first grader...she was going to break some hearts...bravo.

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  14. lol sounds like a direct response to mine, well done!

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  15. A fun, cool poem with lots said and unsaid! Loved it!

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  16. Helen, this is utterly wonderful, from start to finish - and I love all of your preferences... although I'd personally take a woman over a man ;-)

    Thank you for sharing this!

    -David

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  17. This was Awesome! you seem like a very cool person and the photo is cute ~Jay

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  18. Dearest Helen,
    No doubt you were your dear Mother's precious girl back then!
    So cute, bright and hopeful looking into life...
    No, both of us would not fit in any box!
    Hugs,
    Mariette

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  19. Yes Helen, many boxes present to us a myriad of possibilities to fill the void in our initiatives.

    Hank

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  20. Nothing is going to hold that girl back! This made me smile :)

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  21. Honesty...something we all need, in politics, and life.

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  22. The free-rolling rhythm of this quadrille is so cool and captivating, even as it demands those who would label and box to back off! Strong persona.;>)

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  23. This was AWESOME! I could almost hear it set to music. Don't box me in! Sadly, too often people try to use labels and boxes to compartmentalize us into people they are comfortable with. Instead of appreciating another's uniqueness.

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I appreciate each of you and the comments you leave ~~ thanks so much.