gaze at
that face
do you
see evil there
peddling her apples ~
look if you dare
darkness
her milieu
spells
so grotesque
don’t
let her fool you ~
think ‘Kafkaesque’
what you can’t see
undoubtedly
there
heart
made of stone ~
you don’t stand a prayer
steer
clear of this ghoul
on All
Hallows Eve
I've
given fair warning ~
‘tis best
you believe

Dearest Helen,
ReplyDeleteThat face is JUST mischievous!
Hugs,
Mariette
She looks like a whole load of fun to me!
ReplyDeleteTis best you believe indeed! I love it Helen.
ReplyDeleteI will take your word for it, Helen! 😀
ReplyDeleteI think she looks kind... she is just trying to scare me.
ReplyDeleteShe can't fool me. Well not on Halloween anyway. (Thanks for the warning!)
ReplyDeletepax,
dora
She looks like my Aunt Emma. The apple? Poisoned. No Doubt.
ReplyDeleteNice work Helen!
Good write for this week. :)
ReplyDeleteI am going to stay clear of her for sure. Have a good weekend Helen!
ReplyDeletePeddling, Paddling, Pedaling her apples, whatever she's doing with them, that is NOT a ghoulish face! I'm trying to heed the warning, but I fear she's captured my fancy! Great Halloween fun! Well done.
ReplyDeletebut i like apples... and look at her, she's just adorable =)
ReplyDeleteFriendly smiles don't always mean friend. Some are there to do you in. I love your take on this fairytale!
ReplyDeleteBravo. Luv this poem. Very entertaining
ReplyDeleteMuch💜love
I would certainly not buy a used car from her!
ReplyDeleteAll is not as it seems, especially when it comes to apples, as Snow White found out. Love this Helen. Perfect take on the crone.
ReplyDeleteHalloween fun! Thanks for the warning
ReplyDeletealthough I'd probably end up taking the apple anyway...
~peace,
Jason
Pass me an orange! 😄 Classic beauty there❣
ReplyDeletelol well done Helen but must admit I'm smiling more than trembling ... great write!
ReplyDeleteIs that you, Helen?! <3 :-D Don't you look wonderful! Even if it's not, I'd totally invite her in for tea!
ReplyDeleteGreat verse, love the rhyme, especially:
"darkness her milieu
spells so grotesque
don’t let her fool you
think ‘Kafkaesque’ " - fabulous :-)
you sure have fun this time of year. well, probably all times of year, from what I gather ~
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