Dearest Helen, We don't have a view of the moon on our property and it is too cold for getting outside in the pitch dark... Lovely poem! Hugs, Mariette
I haven't listened, too busy. But Chris Koza sings of The Blackberry Moon (2011), We have a lot of trust in the Moon, that it will continue to follow the rules of conduct that we have retrieved for her. ..
I love the idea of everything stopping for the rising of a blackberry moon, Helen, and the way you describe it as riding ‘tides betwixt ocean and stars’.
You managed to capture the pensive mood of the persona with the stillness and rhythmic continuity of the sun, moon, and night sky. And in just a few lines. Now that's brilliance.
Still, peaceful homage to the first full autumn moon. A name I’d never heard it called — love it Helen! 🙂✌🏼❤️
ReplyDeleteDearest Helen,
ReplyDeleteWe don't have a view of the moon on our property and it is too cold for getting outside in the pitch dark...
Lovely poem!
Hugs,
Mariette
I love that you used blackberry moon. I don't think I've ever heard of it referred to by that name.
ReplyDeleteI haven't listened, too busy. But Chris Koza sings of The Blackberry Moon (2011),
ReplyDeleteWe have a lot of trust in the Moon, that it will continue to follow the rules of conduct that we have retrieved for her.
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There's a great sense of peace here, of time passing gently.
ReplyDeleteenjoyed reading this
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of everything stopping for the rising of a blackberry moon, Helen, and the way you describe it as riding ‘tides betwixt ocean and stars’.
ReplyDeleteAwoooooooooooooooo. Oops, the moon does funny things to me. ;-)
ReplyDeleteI've seen the moon riding the tides, but never found the right description. Beautiful. (Kerfe)
ReplyDeleteThis is gorgeously encapsulated, Helen! Wow! 💘💘
ReplyDeleteYou managed to capture the pensive mood of the persona with the stillness and rhythmic continuity of the sun, moon, and night sky. And in just a few lines. Now that's brilliance.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Helen! Everything in its place between the ocean and Stars!
ReplyDeleteLovely poem 💙
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful description of moon riding tides, Helen!
ReplyDelete"And the moon rises..." Yes, yes it does. 🥰
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of a blackberry moon. Beautiful, Helen!
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