Wednesday, February 28, 2024

Up and Over ~ A Chained Rictameter

 Lisa has us "leaping" into the dVerse Poets Pub   [after all, it IS Leap Year]

Sera Bryant ~ Unsplash


Leaping 

lords and lizards

a plague is upon us 

where do we run where do we hide

in a world filled with deep pain and horror

no place to run no place to hide

the duck, bob and the dodge

as futile as

leaping


Always

the same mistakes

we seem destined to make

poverty, disease and hunger

climate change, war and inequality

we have great minds and resources

yes there are solutions

fight the good fight

always


Rictameter is a scheme similar to Cinquain. Starting your first line with a two syllable word, you then consecutively increase the number of syllables per line by two. i.e. 2, 4, 6, 8, 10 Then down again, 8, 6, 4, 2 Making the final line the same two syllable word you began with.


13 comments:

  1. An apt form for ‘leaping lords and lizards’, Helen, and I love the shape. Sadly, humans never learn from their mistakes.

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  2. Great poem. A challenge for all of us. Too bad we don't use our great minds for things beyond making money!

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    1. Exactly, Dwight. I remember an interview Michael Moore did in one of his movies with a NY stockbroker, who was a brilliant mathematician iirc, who loved math and probably could have gone on to develop an anti-gravity device or something but was instead lured by the $$$$ he could make on Wall Street.

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  3. Indeed... we can do things, but it seems like most of us are reduced to just vote.

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  4. Nice one luv the use of "leaping lords and lizards"
    Thanks for dropping by to read mine.

    Much♡love

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  5. 'the duck, bob and the dodge

    as futile as

    leaping' ~ love this! A well thought out poem for the days we live in.

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  6. Helen, wonderful form and each word of it has weight here. Yes, we can, if we have a will to act.

    Not sure if you've seen this site before, first created by David Byrne of Talking Heads. Reasons to Be Cheerful is a place I go when I want to believe:
    https://reasonstobecheerful.world/about/

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  7. Yes there are solutions. The best thing we can do is VOTE. Love your leaping lords and lizards.

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  8. Always. I am hoping the best Helen.

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  9. Let's leap to it! "There are solutions" -- if only we come together long enough to find them. Love your optimism, Helen, which we sorely need.

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  10. It's a mystery to me too Helen...I was just reading another story of local corruption in the paper this morning and wondering how is it that humans are so greedy and mean? Even in such small things. But you are right, we must not give up fighting against it.

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  11. This is gorgeous work done, Helen! 🩷🩷🩷

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  12. Love the form, Helen and your words deeply resonate!!

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I appreciate each of you and the comments you leave ~~ thanks so much.