Friday, June 14, 2024

The Waltz

Laura hosts Meeting the Bar in the Poets Pub ~ our challenge, to create a 'fragment poem'. I used the last three lines from the last stanza of Leonard Cohen's "Take This Waltz" song ~ which was influenced by Federico Garcia Lorca's "Little Viennese Waltz Poem." The lines I chose are italicized in red.


a gift from the universe ~

this moment carved from eternity

our bodies a language

spoken without words

O my love, O my love

each turn, each pivot

sweet fire burns within.

we are infinite, we are free

we are music, we are dance

lost in a cadence of our creation

take this waltz, take this waltz

every heartbeat a promise

every touch our solemn vow

it's yours now, it's all that there is.










13 comments:

  1. Leonard Cohen....doesn't get any better than that. Good choice!

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  2. very moving Helen literally and in the sway of the rhythm - I did not know about the Lorca connection (and love LC's waltz)

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  3. Dearest Helen,
    Yes, we are infinite and free!
    Hugs,
    Mariette

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  4. In Cohen's speech at the Asturias Prize ceremony, he spoke of Lorca as granting him “permission to find a voice, to locate a voice, (...) to locate a self: a self that is not fixed, a self that struggles for its own existence.”

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  5. So romantic!

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  6. Luv what you did with the Leonard Cohen fragment. Your porm fliwed so smoothly.
    Thank you for dropping by to read mine

    much♡love

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  7. A Love song from you, Helen, Lorca and Leonard - what a heady mix...

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  8. "We are infinite, we are free

    we are music, we are dance

    lost in the cadence of our creation"

    Lovely, Helen. :)

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  9. Amazing, I saw Cohen in your text... love it

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  10. Not sure if my comment registered. I got a warning and it switched me to a different site..I'll try once more..I had said when I moved to Africa, I took just three cassettes with me... and one was Leonard Cohen. Love everything he's done! Good choice.. Judy

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  11. Can't ever go wrong with Leonard, and you didn't!

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  12. Beautiful. “our bodies a language
    spoken without words”❤️

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