Ah, the equinox ~ celestial tipping point where day and night stand, for just a moment, perfectly balanced like two old friends straddling a see-saw. Lean a little too far, and oops! There you go ~ slipping toward that inevitable tumble into winter. Frankly, I don’t want to tip. No, I want to hang right here, in the golden twilight of summer, feet firmly planted in warm grass ~ not skating on thin ice!
People say there’s beauty in winter’s starkness. I’m squinting and I still can’t see it. I'd trade all the one-of-a-kind snowflakes for just one more day of summer sun.
So here I am, teetering at the edge of the equinox, trying not to fall over. If anyone sees me slipping, a hand would be appreciated ~ but only if it comes with sunscreen.
too old to follow
geese as they happily fly
south to where it's warm

Love that photo. I thought of a see-saw (teeter-totter) too. I like "the inevitable tumble into winter."
ReplyDeleteDearest Helen,
ReplyDeleteYes, all of us want to stay firmly planted with our feet in in the golden twilight of summer...
Hugs,
Mariette
A wonderful haibun, Helen. I am with you on staying put!
ReplyDeleteA haibun with more in it than first appears between the words...delightful last sentence of the prose, and the see saw imagery is potent.
ReplyDeleteI love the phrase ‘celestial tipping point’ and the image of ‘two old friends straddling a see-saw’. I don't mind the tumble, it's the winter I want to avoid. The haiku says it all!
ReplyDelete😊 "a hand would be appreciated ~ but only if it comes with sunscreen."
ReplyDeleteAppreciate your wit. Nice haibun
much♡love
This is direct and witty and I love it. Yes, please can we have more summer
ReplyDeleteI don't mind the snow... but darkness is hard to live in.
ReplyDeleteAh, to enjoy the Equinox for longer than a day! Love the wistful longing in this one, Helen!
ReplyDeleteThis is very relatable. I too wish for more summer days and would gladly skip winter. I liked your seesaw visual. May we both find poems to keep us warm through the cold months ahead.
ReplyDeleteFirstly: love the photograph. Trading snowflakes for a summer's day is perfectly reasonable I should think.
ReplyDeleteAhh the golden twilight of summer. I love the line about offering a hand only if it comes with sunscreen.
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