Monday, September 23, 2024

Tipping Point

 

Time for Haibun in the dVerse Poets Pub ~ Frank is host and asks us to write about the Solar Equinox! On the day of an equinox, daytime and nighttime are of approximately equal duration all over the planet.




Ah, the equinox ~ celestial tipping point where day and night stand, for just a moment, perfectly balanced like two old friends straddling a see-saw. Lean a little too far, and oops! There you go ~ slipping toward that inevitable tumble into winter. Frankly, I don’t want to tip. No, I want to hang right here, in the golden twilight of summer, feet firmly planted in warm grass ~ not skating on thin ice!

People say there’s beauty in winter’s starkness. I’m squinting and I still can’t see it. I'd trade all the one-of-a-kind snowflakes for just one more day of summer sun.

So here I am, teetering at the edge of the equinox, trying not to fall over. If anyone sees me slipping, a hand would be appreciated ~ but only if it comes with sunscreen.

too old to follow

geese as they happily fly

south to where it's warm






12 comments:

  1. Love that photo. I thought of a see-saw (teeter-totter) too. I like "the inevitable tumble into winter."

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  2. Dearest Helen,
    Yes, all of us want to stay firmly planted with our feet in in the golden twilight of summer...
    Hugs,
    Mariette

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  3. A wonderful haibun, Helen. I am with you on staying put!

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  4. A haibun with more in it than first appears between the words...delightful last sentence of the prose, and the see saw imagery is potent.

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  5. I love the phrase ‘celestial tipping point’ and the image of ‘two old friends straddling a see-saw’. I don't mind the tumble, it's the winter I want to avoid. The haiku says it all!

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  6. 😊 "a hand would be appreciated ~ but only if it comes with sunscreen."

    Appreciate your wit. Nice haibun

    much♡love

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  7. This is direct and witty and I love it. Yes, please can we have more summer

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  8. I don't mind the snow... but darkness is hard to live in.

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  9. Ah, to enjoy the Equinox for longer than a day! Love the wistful longing in this one, Helen!

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  10. This is very relatable. I too wish for more summer days and would gladly skip winter. I liked your seesaw visual. May we both find poems to keep us warm through the cold months ahead.

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  11. Firstly: love the photograph. Trading snowflakes for a summer's day is perfectly reasonable I should think.

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  12. Ahh the golden twilight of summer. I love the line about offering a hand only if it comes with sunscreen.

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I appreciate each of you and the comments you leave ~~ thanks so much.