Saturday, November 30, 2024

WINTRY BITE!

  Magaly invites us to create poetry or prose while considering the phrase “Careful: May bite!



Pine scented air bites sharp and clean

each breath a reminder of life 

of the warmth waiting just ahead


our cabin's glow flickering in the distance

promises wrapped in cedar and smoke


inside the fire roars ~

flames cast golden shadows that whisper

of comfort ~ of home


we sink into each other 

the weight of winter 

lifted by your arms

  











6 comments:

  1. Oh, that's beautiful! I am now glad you deleted the football limerick which was your initial response to the prompt. That was fun, but this is so much more to my taste.

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  2. This is a bite to savor … the coziness and warmth supportive relationships bring. :)

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  3. Beautiful, Helen. I love that you used weather as biting.

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