
To acknowledge the New Year, Rosemary invites us to look through our writings, see if there is anything we might "remix" ~ create something brand new! I published these poems years ago ~ today I created a new poem using several lines from each. 2014 poem is on my blog, 2015 isn't.
2014
turn around look at me
see the curve of my lip
the sparkle in my eyes
arms wide open
i have enough happiness
for the two of us
2015
you came close enough
to feel my shame
I have no need
to show you more
content to lie here
wait out the night
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you came close enough
turn around look at me
see the curve of my lip
i have no need
to show you more
i have enough happiness
for the two of us
How beautifully remixed!
ReplyDeleteI love how you have played with your wonderful words - like refining a painting
ReplyDeletePerfection!!
ReplyDeleteA nice utopian reality!!
Nice to have enough happiness for two!
ReplyDeletePK
Oh that's a lovely remix!!
ReplyDeleteWonderful remix, Helen!
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