Time for Poetics in the dVerse Poets Pub ~ Merril is hosting ~ the subject of "fate" is the direction we are heading ~ how we interpret fate, how fate impacts our lives ~~
Fate it seems wears a lab coat
scribbling notes in the
margins of my chromosomes
chuckling over coffee with
Madame Destiny ~ betting on whether
I'll get my Dad's cholesterol or
my Mother's luscious brunette locks
DNA that sneaky old scroll
rolled up tight like a military tent
passed along like fruitcake
nobody wants ~ but everyone takes
a bite of
I am a walking talking heirloom
fair skin and blue eyes ~ both
second-hand traits
proof that nature loves
a remix and
fate has a sense of humour!

Oh, I love where this led, Helen!Those hidden traits!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the comparison of DNA to fruitcake.
ReplyDeleteI love that second hand traits from the genes, including sense of humor. Good one Helen.
ReplyDeleteVery well written, Helen. Yes, DNA gets passed on down like it or not. It can be altered a bit but it is always there.
ReplyDeleteI love this... passed along like fruitcake
nobody wants ~ but everyone takes
a bite of...
I love the personification of fate in a lab coat ‘scribbling notes in the margins’ of chromosomes, Helen, and DNA ‘passed along like fruitcake nobody wants’. A light-hearted take on fate.
ReplyDeleteNicely done. I like the thought of fate laying within our DNA.
ReplyDeleteOne is always humbled by fate -- what a relief to hear "nature loves / a remix and / fate has a sense of humour!" I've been doing a little ancestry research, got the DNA test & etc but the scientific shoptalk is so beyond my energy to care where my daddies' mommies' uncle Georges erred Saturday nights long ago ...
ReplyDeleteHow nice to be a walking talking heirloom. Lovely poem, Helen. Robbie
ReplyDeleteIndeed... DNA is the closest we have to destiny.... but still and element of randomness
ReplyDeleteGorgeous lines...that tone....those words used...delightful...at very your best with this sharp edge, Helen!
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome poem, Helen! I love it!
ReplyDeleteYvette M Calleiro :-)
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Love this, Helen! Very clever.
ReplyDeleteFantastic, Helen! I love this. Oft when my kids complain about some trait they have, I tell them blame your destiny that you got it from your dad. Lol
ReplyDeleteExcellent write and an enjoyable read! A walking talking heirloom indeed!
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