Tuesday, April 22, 2025

To Be ~ Or Not To Be

Time for Poetics in the dVerse Poets Pub ~ Merril is hosting ~ the subject of "fate" is the direction we are heading ~ how we interpret fate, how fate impacts our lives ~~



Fate it seems wears a lab coat

scribbling notes in the 

margins of my chromosomes

chuckling over coffee with 

Madame Destiny ~ betting on whether 

I'll get my Dad's cholesterol or

my Mother's luscious brunette locks

DNA that sneaky old scroll

rolled up tight like a military tent

passed along like fruitcake

nobody wants ~ but everyone takes

a bite of

I am a walking talking heirloom

fair skin and blue eyes ~ both

second-hand traits

proof that nature loves

a remix and

fate has a sense of humour!




14 comments:

  1. Oh, I love where this led, Helen!Those hidden traits!

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  2. I really enjoyed the comparison of DNA to fruitcake.

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  3. I love that second hand traits from the genes, including sense of humor. Good one Helen.

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  4. Very well written, Helen. Yes, DNA gets passed on down like it or not. It can be altered a bit but it is always there.
    I love this... passed along like fruitcake
    nobody wants ~ but everyone takes
    a bite of...

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  5. I love the personification of fate in a lab coat ‘scribbling notes in the margins’ of chromosomes, Helen, and DNA ‘passed along like fruitcake nobody wants’. A light-hearted take on fate.

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  6. Nicely done. I like the thought of fate laying within our DNA.

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  7. One is always humbled by fate -- what a relief to hear "nature loves / a remix and / fate has a sense of humour!" I've been doing a little ancestry research, got the DNA test & etc but the scientific shoptalk is so beyond my energy to care where my daddies' mommies' uncle Georges erred Saturday nights long ago ...

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  8. How nice to be a walking talking heirloom. Lovely poem, Helen. Robbie

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  9. Indeed... DNA is the closest we have to destiny.... but still and element of randomness

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  10. Gorgeous lines...that tone....those words used...delightful...at very your best with this sharp edge, Helen!

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  11. What an awesome poem, Helen! I love it!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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  12. Fantastic, Helen! I love this. Oft when my kids complain about some trait they have, I tell them blame your destiny that you got it from your dad. Lol

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  13. Excellent write and an enjoyable read! A walking talking heirloom indeed!

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I appreciate each of you and the comments you leave ~~ thanks so much.