Friday, August 4, 2023

Pick 'em Up!

 Breathing life into a tired old cliché by using it in an unusual way!


[ let's call a spade a spade, shall we ]
(broken) promises that you made
times you threw some awful shade
runaround games that you played
all the deadlines you delayed 
many times you have strayed
personal values you betrayed
thinking life a big charade 
outcomes you unfairly swayed 
best intentions oft mislaid 
[ must be time to reshuffle the deck?? ]






12 comments:

  1. Very clever use of the cliche...Love the pic.You are so glamorous and lucky to still be able to wear those gorgeous pink high heels .... a tad envious RALL

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  2. Dearest Helen,
    A very clever way with words...!
    Hugs,
    Mariette

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  3. Yes, of all means, scuffle the deck.
    p.s. BTW, I found your model, after the shuffle.
    https://www.flickr.com/photos/31623152@N03/3360738127/
    ..

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  4. Nice way to end it... clever!!

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  5. Very well done, Helen. I love that you are part of the deck. Are you the Queen of Spades?

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  6. Honest and raw sharing, Helen. Sometimes that is all that is left to do.

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  7. I'd be shuffling too, if I had to wear shoes like those! :-) Love your playful ditty. ♥

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  8. Such fun Helen but I am beginning to recognise - that's you...

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