Wednesday, July 30, 2025

Imagine

Merril hosts Poetics in the dVerse Poets Pub ~ Music is the theme

In 1985, as the film "The Killing Fields" ended, and the credits rolled ~ John Lennon's music filled the theatre. I could not move ~ sat in my seat, sobbing ~ for what seemed like hours ~




i didn't expect the piano

soft as a mercy

then Lennon

imagining peace

but today

the bombs still fall

on children who
 
never heard of Lennon

imagine one olive branch

still green

in a garden of ash




13 comments:

  1. That was a hard movie to watch. We seem further away from imagining peace than we were then.

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  2. Hi Helen. I watched The Killing Fields when I was a child and it gave me nightmares. My dad‘s a Vietnam War Vet and he hoped there would be no more war, but… I really like you what you’ve written, and it would be nice if John Lennon could have been correct.

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  3. Beautiful Helen. Thank you. The bombs will continue to fall as the lunacy of man has no limit. Imagine. . . what a gift John Lennon was.

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  4. Very well written, Helen. It is sad that we never seem to learn!

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  5. Gah. This goes straight to the heart. I remember emerging from the theatre feeling as if I had been in a war................and now look where we are. Oy.

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  6. Helen. Hi. This is concise beauty. Your short piece speaks volumes. Why are the caray ones ruling the world? How crazy is Human? But we gotta bet on love —give it a chance before peace can settle in. Let’s keep loving. Thanks for the lovely words. Bless you. Xo, Selma

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  7. I wish we had the means to realize John's dream. I think of his own end and weep :(

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  8. Shocking post Ellen!
    This music and Lennon's voice...
    Your poem is wonderful.
    It's so terrible that humanity is still tormented by wars....

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  9. How dare the authoritarians push their agenda of power and greed while the rest of us are with you and Lennon desperately trying to cling on to that olive branch - very strong helen...

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  10. Oh Helen, such a moving poem. With or without the film, ‘Imagine’ is a heartfelt, heart-warming song. But the film without the song at the end is another matter. I love the opening lines with the ‘piano soft as a mercy’ and the thought of ‘one olive branch still green in a garden of ash’.

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  11. Awesome brevity and powerfully understated. 👏

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  12. If Lennon is looking down now, he ust be as disgusted as we are.

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