Monday, March 16, 2026

Yoda Kitty

Merril is tending bar in the dVerse Poets Pub ~ We are to compose prose of no more than 144 words which must include this line from D.H. Lawrence's poem 'Winter Lull' ~  It all belies our existence; we wait and are still denied.





I've been sitting here for more than several minutes. Possibly hours. Time moves differently when one is starving. My bowl is empty. I've verified this repeatedly. My human walked through the kitchen a moment ago. She glanced out at me, nodded politely, continued on her way. Humans are very poor observers. I tried moving close to the bowl. I tried staring at it with unwavering intensity. I looked back and forth between the bowl and my human in what I believe was a clear demonstration of the problem. Nothing. It all belies our existence. We wait and are still denied what matters most. In this case, the pressing matter is tuna! I'm moving to the center of the hallway, she must step over me. This has proven effective in the past. If that fails, I may have to begin knocking things off the counter.








 

14 comments:

  1. I love this playful point of view- I suspect it may well be true as well as a story we can share - Jae

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  2. Helen, you've perfectly inhabited the mind of a cat. They try to make it seem accidental and nonchalant but. I lol'ed at this. Good to see you!

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  3. Seems quite cat worthy to me. Lol You integrated the line into your prose very well. I like this piece.

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  4. Hehe what a creative interpretation of the line.

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  5. Very creative thought text Ellen.
    They could be real thoughts of a cat!
    I really like it, as well as the photo!

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  6. I love the way you took on the cat’s persona, Helen – I’m going to read your Prosery piece to Luna, who is a very discerning cat. And I would never ignore her, especially when she sits beside her bowl!

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  7. Ha ha ha love it. Cats have a way of making it known what they want and being miffed if they don't. Seems your pussy cat is very miffed, he has taken to writing a story. I'd get on to getting him some Tuna quickly!!

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  8. I love this--of course! You really captured what a cat might be thinking. And you slipped the line in so deftly I didn't even notice it at first. 😂

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  9. I got right into this mind of a cat. I am sure it is spot on! Funny and true!

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  10. Luv what you did with the prompt. Happy you dropped by my blog

    Much love

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  11. Helen, you managed to get into the cat's head brilliantly. I love ❤️ this.

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  12. I love this one written by your feline. Perfecto. Lovely write it Helen. Xo Selma

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  13. This made me laugh Helen, a gorgeous and real telling of a cat's take.

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I appreciate each of you and the comments you leave ~~ thanks so much.