Tuesday, May 7, 2024

Timing is Everything


Something told the wild geese it was time to fly! As the sun dipped below the

 horizon ~ the sky painted in hues of orange and purple ~ a single goose honked, a

 signal that rippled through the flock. With a rustle of feathers,  a chorus of calls,

 they took to the sky ~ wings slicing through the cool Autumn air. Below them the

 world was changing ~ leaves turning, farmers harvesting, children pulling their

 coats a little tighter. 

The geese took no notice of these things. Their minds set on the journey ahead. The

 leader of the flock knew the way ~ over great lakes, wide plains through

 mountain passes, down into lush valleys. A journey, though perilous, held the

 promise of life. The geese flew, their formation a perfect V.  Adventurers,

 travelers, survivors bound for a place they call home ~ if only for a season.


Time for Prosery in the  dVerse Poets Pub ~~ Kim shares a line from American writer, Rachel Lyman Field's poem "Something Told The Wild Geese" for inclusion in our prose.



6 comments:

  1. Oh yes, Helen, timing is everything! The way you started your Prosery piece with the prompt line and an exclamation mark, almost says: ‘And they’re off!’ I love the use of colour, the change of focus from the sky to the world below, and then back to the sky and the geese again - cinematic.

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  2. An inspiringly written evocation of this wondrous moment when geese answer the "promise of life, " these "Adventurers, travelers, survivors bound for a place they call home"-- even if it's only for a season. A treat to read, Helen.

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  3. I feel the energy of anticipation for the wonderful adventures ahead... I would love to feel that energy

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  4. Dearest Helen,
    Well, my Pieter also has reached his much deserved place—called HOME.
    Hugs,
    Mariette

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  5. Perfect post!!
    Very beautiful picture really in itself has something almost poetic!
    The poem makes you think, yes I believe coordination is very important in life!

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  6. Did you know that the leaders of the "V" formed flocks is exchanged, passed around every a variable number of calories expended. Head winds take a lot more energy for the leader to 'break wind' than tail winds. The way Mom Nature figured it out.
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