Something
told the wild geese it was time to fly! As
the sun dipped below the
horizon ~ the sky painted in hues of orange
and purple ~ a single goose honked, a
signal that rippled through the
flock. With a rustle of feathers, a chorus of calls,
they took to the
sky ~ wings slicing through the cool Autumn air. Below them the
world
was changing ~ leaves turning, farmers harvesting, children pulling
their
coats a little tighter.
The geese took no notice of these
things. Their minds set on the journey ahead. The
leader of the flock
knew the way ~ over great lakes, wide plains through
mountain
passes, down into lush valleys. A journey, though perilous, held
the
promise of life. The geese flew, their formation a perfect V. Adventurers,
travelers, survivors bound for a place they call home ~ if only for a season.
Time for Prosery in the dVerse Poets Pub ~~ Kim shares a line from American writer, Rachel Lyman Field's poem "Something Told The Wild Geese" for inclusion in our prose.

Oh yes, Helen, timing is everything! The way you started your Prosery piece with the prompt line and an exclamation mark, almost says: ‘And they’re off!’ I love the use of colour, the change of focus from the sky to the world below, and then back to the sky and the geese again - cinematic.
ReplyDeleteAn inspiringly written evocation of this wondrous moment when geese answer the "promise of life, " these "Adventurers, travelers, survivors bound for a place they call home"-- even if it's only for a season. A treat to read, Helen.
ReplyDeleteI feel the energy of anticipation for the wonderful adventures ahead... I would love to feel that energy
ReplyDeleteDearest Helen,
ReplyDeleteWell, my Pieter also has reached his much deserved place—called HOME.
Hugs,
Mariette
Perfect post!!
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful picture really in itself has something almost poetic!
The poem makes you think, yes I believe coordination is very important in life!
Did you know that the leaders of the "V" formed flocks is exchanged, passed around every a variable number of calories expended. Head winds take a lot more energy for the leader to 'break wind' than tail winds. The way Mom Nature figured it out.
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